Some of you know that I am (or was, depending on how you measure past tense) writing a novel. Those of you who know this also probably know that I’ve had one heckuva case of writer’s block for about two months, which is downright disillusioning when you consider this is my first crack at it. Isn’t writer’s block something you get after you’ve got a National Book Award or a Pulitzer under your belt? Don’t you kind of have to earn it?
Apparently not.
I’ve had the devil’s own luck anwering that age-old question: What happens next? The answer that keeps presenting itself: You have absolutely no idea, sucka.
Enter Pixar Man. My boss, Bill (some of you met him last Friday night. He was the one who ill-advisedly sang “Why Don’t We Get Drunk and Screw?” and you’re crazy if you think I love Jesus too much not to blackmail him for a raise) went to school fifteen years ago with a guy who is now a story artist for Pixar. This guy happened to be in the Ventura area this week, and Bill convinced him to do a seminar on the creative process of story.
Oh, yeah.
It was humbling and so much more to sit there and listen to this wildly entertaining guy tell me stuff I already knew and to lap it up like gin from the cat dish. As he reiterated the basics of great story, I realized with a groan that Lack of Structure ain’t just a town in Switzerland. It’s my Problem. The Reason for My Writer’s Block.
Argh. Blech. Pfsaw.
I’m not out of the woods, but I’m back to the drawing board. Instead of trying to answer “What happens next?” I’m getting all modern up in the hiz-ouse and asking “What elements of story do I have already, and which ones did I forget along with my lunch money?”
As a public service, I’m including those elements here. They apply every time, unless you’re one of those writers who are doing everything they damn well can to throw off the yoke of Story Fascism. (This sometimes works well, just not for me. See anything by Chuck Palahniuk…but even he likes his crises and climaxes.) I’ll use Pixar Man’s examples:
1. Inciting event (Buzz Lightyear moves into Andy’s Room)
2. Progressing complications (Buzz becomes Andy’s favorite toy; Woody tries to push him out the window)
3. Crisis (Buzz and Woody end up in evil-kid Sid’s house and Woody has to make A Decision)
4. Climax (Woody makes The Right Choice and he and Buzz scare the bejeezus out of Sid, escaping into the sunset)
5. Resolution (Buzz and Woody become friends, and together protect and boss around the other Citizens, er…toys)
And They All Lived…
Chad 6:59 pm on 20 October 2005 Permalink
Aly,
You are really looking for advice on good story structure from the wrong people. Pixar hasn’t managed a decent story in 10 years, and their scripts aren’t at all funny, inventive, nuanced with emotion, or economic.
Maybe you should check out “Doom” when it comes out this weekend. I hear there’s a bitchin’ first person shooter sequence and it has The Friggen Rock in it.
aly hawkins 7:07 pm on 20 October 2005 Permalink
[laughing really hard]
Pixar Man actually joked about how the premiere of every new Pixar film is cause for copious amounts of therapy – which is, of course, covered by the company’s insurance – since they have yet to produce a dud. He tore at his hair and paced around mumbling “The pressure, man, the pressure!” Like I said, wildly entertaining.
michael lee 7:18 pm on 20 October 2005 Permalink
i’m am seriously upset that you didn’t immediately call us to come with you. you’re on my “angry face” list.
aly hawkins 7:30 pm on 20 October 2005 Permalink
Geez. It was kinda last minute. I only found out about it on Monday morning, and had to put on the whole event on Tuesday after putting on Another Event over the weekend. Invites were not on the top of my list. [Angry face right back atcha.] That’s why I’m sharing my notes.
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Also, it was videoed (is that actually a verb?), and I should have a DVD tomorrow. Simmer down, now…
michael lee 10:50 pm on 20 October 2005 Permalink
i’m officially simmered down. i will demand a copy of the DVD. DEMAND, i tell you!
Chad 12:21 am on 21 October 2005 Permalink
Wait a minute,
You produced the event and you didn’t tell us?!?! Double angry face.
Morphea 8:26 am on 21 October 2005 Permalink
Buncha divas circling your boat, Aly. Here, use my cat-o’-nine-tails.
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I’m glad that everything went well, my dear. And that for all your trouble on Monday that dude was not only helpful to you but entertaining. You deserved it. Ramon was sick with envy. And it’s angry EYES, losers.
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Cerise
aly hawkins 11:07 am on 21 October 2005 Permalink
I have the most egocentric friends EVER.
Morphea 11:35 am on 21 October 2005 Permalink
Yes, right, [ahem] – we SHOULD be talking about Aly’s writer’s block, you insensitive brutes. ANGRY EYES?? Who’s that Cerise chick anyway? Bitch…
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Seriously. I’m being serious, now. Truly. I think the people that love you, Aly, hurt very much for you when you’re experiencing a pause in One Of The Things You Want To Do The Most. And as a rabid (rabid, I tell you) follower of your work [not only because I love you and want you to go forward with things you love and are very good at but because I also LOOOOOOOOVE the story] I rejoice that what could have been a major workplace pain in the patootie turned into a wildly entertaining source of help for you. I’m so happy that you got a ray of light.
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And for the record, you will recall that I DID tell you that messily killing one of your characters off would help your story and you just didn’t listen.
aly hawkins 11:41 am on 21 October 2005 Permalink
Thanks for the pep talk, ‘rise. I was actually kind of laughing at myself after I wrote “I have egocentric friends.” What the heck was this whole post, but one huge me-centered celebration of Me-opia? I’m a fine one to complain about egocentricity.
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And, yes, you did suggest a brutal death. Someday I’ll learn to listen.
Morphea 11:59 am on 21 October 2005 Permalink
Pep talk?? I give ‘pep talks’? Sh*t…
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Stop with the “No, I’M more egocentric”. Come on. We got WAY off track after you seriously (well, kind of) shared a bit of hope you got regarding a Very Important Thing.
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Let’s 86 the brutal death idea. I just started my third Dan Brown novel and then decided I just couldn’t take it anymore. The brutal deaths combined with the long legs and surprisingly high, firm breasts and beautiful long hair…no more. Keep it Wonder Woman, girlfriend.
Morphea 12:02 pm on 21 October 2005 Permalink
Sorry – I’m the read back and regret queen lately. I sounded a bit stringent just then and was really just trying to be cute. Drat.
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Sorry…
Karen and Bobby 1:22 pm on 21 October 2005 Permalink
Thanks so much for this Aly. It is good to remember what the elements of a story are. I continue to think I may someday write a book but I have to actually take some time to do it.
Good luck getting over your writers block! I can’t wait to read your book.
Karen :0)
Gretchen 3:35 pm on 24 October 2005 Permalink
She has to go after him to France Aly. I’ve been there 2 and a half days almost (France that is) so I’ll share all my sordid memories.. that are blurry at best.